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dragonflies dance
in the path of my bicycle
no pond in sight
baby oak leaves
in the dead of summer, even
in the path of my bicycle
no pond in sight
baby oak leaves
in the dead of summer, even
More bike trip haiku. These are linked. ^^
btw, I'm not sure if the leaves were oak, and I don't think they were babies... but they were very small and forming new shoots from the tree trunk. :3
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btw, I'm not sure if the leaves were oak, and I don't think they were babies... but they were very small and forming new shoots from the tree trunk. :3
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first part does make me wonder where the dragonfly comes from.
not sure about the ending of the second. "even" is very abrupt and quite confusing.
not sure about the ending of the second. "even" is very abrupt and quite confusing.