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'Autumn Sun'

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autumn sun setting,
candy colored clouds and skies:
orange fruit parfait.
I was inspired by :iconmsjames:'s essay on haiku ([link]) to write this. My favorite part of the day is sunset and its gorgeous colors, so...

Since I really want to improve my Haiku-ing skills, I'd really appreciate advanced critique on this one. ^^
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